Showing posts with label Contests. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Contests. Show all posts

Friday, October 3, 2014

Brandon Sanderson Contest on Figment

Figment is sponsoring another contest (as they do monthly) and once again, I have entered - they are too fun to resist!  This one has some pretty amazing prizes if you win!  Here are the deets:

Random House Children’s Books and Brandon Sanderson, New York Times bestselling author of Steelheart and the upcoming Firefight, want to hear from you!

In 1,000 words or fewer, write a story that follows the following prompt, created by Brandon Sanderson himself:
 
“If you were a super-villain, what would your one power be? And how would you use it to conquer the world?”

So, here is my take on the prompt - hope you like it!!



SO WHAT DO WE DO WITH OUR LIVES
WE LEAVE ONLY A MARK
WILL OUR STORY SHINE LIKE A LIGHT
OR END IN THE DARK
GIVE IT ALL OR NOTHING
~Tina Turner, We Don't Need Another Hero


I haven't seen the light in six hundred and fifty-four days.  My cell is dark like the gray haze of smoke rising from a raging inferno.  There is no light that can penetrate the thickness that swallows me; suffocating me, squeezing my neck like a scarf pulled too tight.  My lungs feel as though mud has caked every inch of the spongy surface, my breath comes in short, ragged puffs.  I still have at least twenty-five thousand days of my life sentence remaining.

I'm not sure my body will hold out.  Of course that was the purpose.  To stifle all that I am, what I can do.  But to know why I am here, you must first understand how I came to be.
                                                                *     *     *
They say I am an enigma, a freak of nature and should be put down like a feral beast.  And to them, when they caught me, that's exactly what I had looked like.  I was hunched beside an elm tree, curled into a tight ball, my long, black hair twisted in snarls down my back.  My eyes were wild; pupils dilated filling the entire circumference of my milky blue irises.  I not only looked like a wild animal, but as I snapped my jaw at the approaching men in black, they muzzled me like a rabid dog.  The cold metal grated into my skin, burning my flesh, searing any humanity from my already lost self.  My wrists were shackled together behind my back with the strange metal, eliciting more internal wails from my locked jaw.

The men pulled me to my feet, wrenching my arms up from behind nearly dislocating my shoulders.  Stars danced in front of my face, my head reeled back and my knees buckled.  I collapsed to the ground landing on the hard concrete, jarring my bony knees and jamming my teeth.  Warm, iron tasting liquid pooled in my mouth; I had bitten through part of my tongue.  They pulled me off the ground, yelling for me to stand.  I didn't have any fight left; I was too drained.  I stood on wobbly legs as the men dug their iron-spiked gloves into the fleshy parts of my arms and dragged me across the pavement towards a black van.

The doors in the back opened, two more men in black jumped out holding a metal collar that they clamped around my neck.  They yelled at me to comply, or they would have to use force.  A part of me laughed, is that not what they were doing?

"I was only trying to save him," I said hoarsely to the men beside me.

I had seen the boy in a dream; it was like that every time.  I saw exactly where he would be and how it would happen.  The boy, his face and fingers still chubby with youth, the shock of red curls on his head; was too young to leave this life.  I saw how he carelessly leaped off the curb, how his eyes focused on nothing but the small park across the street.  In my dream, I yelled for him to stop, and searched frantically for his parents but no one was nearby.  I woke with a start, clenched my body and brought up the vision of the dream.  I saw the tree-lined street, the red car parked along the curb blocking the boy's line of sight.  I saw the cracks in the pavement and then lastly I pictured the boy in his navy blue shirt and tan shorts.

The air was sucked out of the room; the dull light faded into blackness and was followed by a deafening POP, ringing in my ears like a sonic boom.  I collided with the boy, knocking him out of the way of the speeding car only inches before he had been hit.  But then the worst happened; the driver of the car swerved in the opposite direction and jumped the curb speeding toward the small park.  My mouth went slack; the tires squealed and then came to a gruesome stop.  The car had run down the boy's frantic mother, her screams cut short with her last breath from under the vehicle.
The man beside me pushed me into the back of the van releasing the iron spikes from my arms flooding me with a sense of joyous relief.  The set of the man's jaw and the vein pumping rapidly on his forehead told me all I needed to know; he didn't care about the why.  "We don't need another hero," the man growled as the door of the van slammed behind him snuffing out the light.  Something stabbed me in the thigh like a bee sting and I realize have injected me with something.  My eyes grew heavy and my head filled with fog.

I don't understand why they have taken me captive.  I was only trying to help; I've only ever tried to help.  I focus on my bedroom, the buttery yellow walls and floral curtains.  The creamy bedspread my parents bought me last summer.  But the familiar sensation of teleporting doesn't come.  Anger welled up inside of me, burning like acid in my stomach.  How dare they treat me like this, like I'm a threat to everyone.

"I only tried to help!"  I yelled into the darkness.  And as my eyes closed, shutting out the light for the last time, I vowed to take my revenge on these men dressed in black.  I vowed to make them pay for hurting me.  And then a wonderful, horrible thought seeped into my mind; I would take revenge on everyone, make them pay for not understanding.  And from the darkness came a bone-chilling laugh like none I've ever heard.

Monday, June 23, 2014

Writing challenge

In addition to being a part of the online community at Figment.com, I'm part of the FNTW (Figment's Next Top Writer) summer camp.  It's fun - you should try it.

Anyway, within the summer camp there are miscellaneous challenges for your "house" (imagine Harry Potter houses; Gryffendor, Hufflepuff, etc.).  Here is a prompt for the current challenge for the summer camp:

Write a short story that involves all of your house mates. You must mention the mascot of your house and incorporate it into your story's plot somehow.  Word count minimum: 200 words Word count maximum: 999 words

Here is my submission:

Three days is always too long; and I would know.  Mom and dad are running around the house, like scenes in a movie on fast forward.  Two suitcases and a small travel bag later, they are hugging and kissing me goodbye and out the door all before I have time to breathe.  The house already feels empty; eerily quiet and immediately the chills set in.

I can do this.  I haveto.

I push the linen drapes away from the window, press my fingers against the cool glass and watch as my parents drive away to God knows where.  My breath leaves a foggy haze on the glass and suddenly I feel like I'm six-years-old and want to draw goofy pictures in the fog with my trembling fingers.  I really need to pull myself together.  I've done this dozens of times; I'm not sure why I'm kind of freaking out right now.

My cell vibrates in my back pocket and I stifle a scream.

iiLov3Yuhh!!  C ya in English :( 

Its Sierra, my best friend.  I send her a quick text back, shoulder my backpack and flick the light switch off.  The living room darkens and the shadows spread over the furniture like monsters waiting for me to turn my back so they can attack.  I've never been happier to get to school.

My car purrs to life, and I blare the radio when a song by one of my favorite singers, Sarah Ashlee, comes on.  I can't help but sing to the lyrics even though my voice cracks when I try and stretch to the high notes.  By the time park at school I only have five minutes to get to class.

It’s a foggy, gray type of day with a chilling breeze and I make a run for the two-story brick building.  The less time I have to spend in this gray wind the better.  The green tiled halls are nearly empty except for a few remaining students who don't care if they are late to class.  I drop my backpack in my locker, grab my English notebook and run for class, sliding into the room just as the last bell rings.

"Perfect timing," my teacher Melanie Camacho says as she taps a pen on the palm of her hand.  "I was hoping to have a volunteer this morning."  She smiles and the red heat of embarrassment rises to my cheeks.  "Why don’t you read your essay for us."

I stand at the door with my mouth hanging open; classy, I know.  "Here, in front of the whole class?" I ask.  Ms. Camacho nods and sits down on her squeaky wooden chair.  I lay my book on her desk and pull out my essay and begin reading.

"The life of Kiamesha Sims by B.K. Rivers," my voice cracks.  "Kaimesha Sims was a child prodigy in the psychic community..." When I finish my essay the whole class actually looks like they enjoyed my writing, even Ellie Williams, who is a talented writer.

"Great job," Sierra says as I take my seat next to her.  "I never knew how much you really believed in all that psychic stuff."  I nod and will my burning cheeks to go back to normal.  "Hey," she whispers, "do you have a copy of J.C. Marie's new book, Shackled that I can borrow?

"Sure," I say.  "It's really good!  Come over after school and I'll give it to you."  I’m not going to pass up an opportunity to have Sierra come over especially given how freaked out I was in my own house this morning.

The final bell rings at 3:15, and I am more than ready to go home.  I pass Lexus Ladelle on the way to my car and my heart drops in my chest; I miss my friend.  She joined the cheer leading squad with Sarah Rose and dropped me the second she made the team.  I wave hello as I walk by and she turns away ignoring me.

I take it back; I don't miss that wench at all.

Sierra trails behind me in her beat up Honda Civic and parks next to me in my driveway.  "Thanks for coming home with me," I say as we climb the front steps.

"Where did your parents go this time?" Sierra asks.  I shrug my shoulders as the keys turns in the lock.  The room is dark and as I turn on the lights I see the whole house has been ransacked.  "Holy sh..."  The door falls off it's hinges and lands with a crash on the floor.  Furniture is torn apart, turned upside down, glass is shattered all over the floor.  The television has been knocked to the ground; pages from books litter the room and framed photos of our family lay broken in pieces.  "I’m calling the cops," Sierra says as her elbow locks around mine.

We sit on the cold steps outside until a black and white cop car pulls up and two officers exit the car.  "Miss Rivers?" the woman asks.  I look up and give her a faint smile.  "I'm officer Alexis Duong, this is my partner office Brent Davis."  We spent the next two hours filling out reports and going through the house looking for things that may have been stolen.  Funny thing is, nothing is missing.

"These things happen," officer Duong says as she prepares to leave.  "Do you have somewhere to stay tonight?"

"She's coming home with me," Sierra says quickly.  I nod and watch numbly as the officers drive away.  "What do you think they were looking for?"

"I don't know.  I need to call my parents."  I dial my mom's cell and get a quick busy signal and then dial again.  "What's the really fast busy signal mean?"

"Um, I think that means the number has been disconnected or something."  I dial my dad's cell and get the same fast busy signal.  "Something's wrong Sierra; both my parent's phones aren't working."

Thursday, June 19, 2014

Figment: June Writing Contest

I've been a member of the writing community over at Figment.com since December.  It's a great place to have your writing read and reviewed or just to have people comment on it.  Figment holds monthly contests and this month I jumped on board.  Here is the info:

June Writing Challenge!
junechallenge
Join us in our #JuneChallenge! Write a short story beginning with the first line of The Maze Runner by James Dashner in celebration of our first author Q&A with him on June 23rd.  You will have exactly one week to submit your short story. GOOD LUCK!

Prompt
In 250 words or fewer, write a short story beginning with the line, “He began his new life standing up, surrounded by cold darkness and stale dusty air.” Your story does NOT have to be about The Maze Runner, let your imagination create a whole new story beginning with this line.

CLICK HERE to visit my contest entry page.  Or, just read below:
ASHES TO ASHES
He began his new life standing up, surrounded by cold darkness and stale dusty air.  This of course, was unusual.  In his previous lives they had all but started with a BANG, literally.  Then bursts of colors, marked liked prisms danced with happy chirps and lackadaisical beats.  He always woke to beauty.  This was not beauty.

This was definitely the opposite of beauty.
Rank Fischer knew he was different.  All his lives, he never quite fit with the in-crowd, nor with the stoners or geeks.  He was gray, as if he stood in a low-setting sun and he was tall and thin as a wisp of hair.  Which, speaking of, was charcoal and could never be tamed so he always looked like he just woke up from either a horrific nightmare or had a wild night with multiple women.  Of course the latter could not be true because he was never in one place long enough to meet any wild women; or tame, for that matter.  He was constantly moving, always unsettled amidst the beauty of the world.
He stood now in a scorched and decimated land, where tall grasses and bushes had once reached for the sky and were now reduced to ash and soot.  Burnt fragments of once well-loved cars and buildings now blown to bits littered the ground.  The damage was all around, as far as he could see.  He noted as he stood in this place, void of beauty, that it looked a lot like him.
Thanks to fellow Figment writer, Dendrofilous, for the great cover art!

Tuesday, February 5, 2013

Nathan Bransford's First Paragraph Challenge

I'm not sure how many times I've mentioned Nathan Bransford, but here I am going to do it again.  For any aspiring writers out there, his website is full of incredible advice/tips/helps and an active forum filled with other fellow writers.  You DO NOT want to skip over his blog.  He is a former literary agent turned author that dishes out writerly advice to any who will listen - and I suggest you listen...or read...or, well, you get it!

Yesterday morning, he posted a contest and of course I entered.  It it his 5th Sort-of-Annual Stupendously Ultimate First Paragraph Challenge!   Here's the lowdown:

You can submit one time (seriously, only once), the first paragraph of any of your current works in progress.

Here's what you can win:

  • The Ultimate Grand Prize: A partial manuscript read by Nathan's agent, Catherine Drayton of Inkwell - how awesome is that?!?!
  • All the finalists will win a query critique by Nathan - that in of itself is awesome!
  • All the USA finalists will win an Autographed copy of Nathan's newest installment in the Jacob Wonderbar series!

All the prizes are wonderful and certainly extremely generous, thanks to Nathan and his agent, Ms. Drayton.

My entry was for A Horse Named Penelope and after reading through my first paragraph, I realized I needed to make it more interesting.  Ha!  Nothing like a contest to get you to rework your novel.  Here is the first paragraph that I entered:

When I look in my mirror, I see a girl of flesh and bone. She may not be a beauty queen, but her features are not plain or disfigured. Why is it no one else can see me? I walk by the same students I’ve gone to school with my whole life and not one of them bats an eye. Even the school bus driver misses me every morning – he doesn’t see me either, which means I have to huff it on foot to make it to homeroom on time.
The entries close on Thursday at 7pm - so wish me luck!  Oh, and feel free to enter if you want a chance at any of the prizes mentioned above!!

Thursday, October 11, 2012

Contests: 6 Word Pitch

Author Natalie Whipple is hosting a creative contest that I decided to enter.  It's kind of crazy, here are the details:

How To Enter: In comments, pitch your book in six words. Yup, six. It'll be like extreme Twitter.

Prize: Each winner will receive a query and 10-page manuscript critique.

How You Win: I will choose SIX favorite pitches—those will be my winners.

Deadline: Midnight (Mountain Time), October 14th, 2012 (Winners will be announced Monday, October 15th)

Visit her website for more info: http://betweenfactandfiction.blogspot.com/

By the way, here is my 6 word pitch for The Phoenix: A Gathering.

Girl meets boy.  Boy combusts...naturally.

Tuesday, October 9, 2012

My Query Critique

I received my Query Critique back the other day and was more than thrilled with the comments and suggestions.  You may recall I won a Query Critique by the members of the Writer Therapy blog [see here].  I've removed names for privacy, not that it really matters I suppose, but I thought it would be fair.

Here is what the email said about my query:
Kristie,

Wow, you have a great query here! I was really impressed. I think the biggest things you need to look at are
  1. Shortening your query pitch -- the MAXIMUM length an agent wants to see is around 2 paragraphs. That will help you really get to the heart of the story, and give your query great focus. 
  2. The consequence (the final sentence of the query pitch) is too muddled. She is faced with enslavement, but I'm not quite sure what that means. I would cut the "breaking down defenses" bit, because it just confuses me further, and focus on the enslavement, and how she'll lose her freedom forever (or whatever that entails) -- that is an AMAZING consequence if you nail it right.
  3. You mention the Phoenix, and I am never clear if they are paranormal creatures (ie: werewolves) or if that is just the name of their group. Rather than clarifying, it might be easier just to take the name out and leave it vague in the query. You want the reader to be asking the right questions -- questions that pull them in -- rather than questions about the clarity of the story. If you do want to keep it in, just move Phoenix closer to the area where you describe what that is. I think that will solve the issue easily.   
  4. The Title: Titles changes so often in the publishing company, but it is something that can really be used in a query letter to set you apart. Mostly because it is in the subject of the email, and if it is something that really appeals to an agent, they might be tempted to open it right away. So use the title to your advantage. The Phoenix: A Gathering -- that doesn't set it in a genre. It could even be non-fiction about the city of Phoenix (which is how I read it, at first). So you want something that really sets apart your story. 
  5. Paranormal - I don't read this as a paranormal. The paranormal genre has pretty much trimmed down to anything that is werewolves/vampires/paranormal creatures. Your Phoenix people seem human enough. So I would look at the story and see if it is light scifi or fantasy, or some sub-genre of those. Also, paranormal is out, so sometimes that means automatic rejection. Sometimes it won't, but you don't want that risk. It reads more like a suburban fantasy to me (if it's set in a city and has a darker edge to it). 
I have more notes in the query itself. If you have any questions, feel free to email me to clarify. Hope this helps!! You really have a great story idea there, and I'd love to see this on the book shelf someday. Good luck!
So, in case you were wondering what a critique looks like, here you go (click on the image to enlarge).

Thanks to everyone at Writer Therapy, you guys are great!

Monday, September 24, 2012

Contests: WriterTherapy

I'm so excited!  I won a Query critique from the awesome folk at WriterTherapy.com.  Don't know what a query is?  Well, you will :)

From AgentQuery.com
"A query letter is a single page cover letter, introducing you and your book. That’s it. Nothing more, nothing less. It’s not a resume. It’s not rambling saga of your life as an aspiring writer. It’s not a friendly, “Hey, what’s up, buddy. I’m the next John Grisham. Got the next best selling thriller for ya,” kind of letter. And for the love of god, it is NOT more than one-page. Trust us on this.

A query letter has three concise paragraphs: the hook, the mini-synopsis, and your writer’s biography. Don’t stray from this format. You won’t catch an agent’s attention by inventing a creative new query format. You’ll just alienate your chances of being taken seriously as a professional writer. A query letter is meant to elicit an invitation to send sample chapters or even the whole manuscript to the agent. It’s not meant to show off how cute and snazzy you can be by breaking formatting rules and going against the grain. Keep it simple. Stick to three paragraphs. The goal is to get the agent to read your book, not to blow you off because you screwed up the introduction.


Paragraph One—The Hook: A hook is a concise, one-sentence tagline for your book. It’s meant to hook your reader’s interest, and wind them in.

Paragraph Two—Mini-synopsis: This is where you get to distill your entire 300 page novel into one paragraph. Lucky you.

So think of it this way. You had trouble writing the gist of your book in one sentence, right? Now, you get a whole paragraph. About 150 extra words. Here’s your chance to expand on your hook. Give a little bit more information about your main characters, their problems and conflicts, and the way in which adversity changes their lives. Read the back flaps of your favorite novels and try to copy how the conflict of the book is described in a single, juicy paragraph. You can do this. You really can. You just have to sit down, brainstorm, then vomit it all out onto the page. Afterwards, cut, paste, trim, revise, and reshape.

Paragraph Three—Writer’s bio:
This should be the easiest part of your query. After all, it’s about you, the writer. Okay, so it’s a bit daunting, especially if you’ve never been published, never won any awards, hold no degrees from MFA writing schools, and possess no credentials to write your book. No problem. The less you have to say, the more space you have for your mini-synopsis. Always a plus.

Your Closing:
Congratulations! You’ve finished your query letter. As a formal closing, be sure to do two things. First, thank the agent for her time and consideration.  If it’s fiction, alert the agent that the full manuscript is available upon request. And in case you still don’t believe us, we want to reiterate: don’t query agents until you’ve finished your full fiction manuscript. Agents will want to read the whole novel before they offer representation to you and your book."
So...are you ready to read my Query Letter for The Phoenix: A Gathering?  I'm sure it's not quite perfect, but I've revised it probably 10 times in the last month or two.  I hope it's close!
Dear Agent (this will obviously be personalized),

Seventeen-year-old Ivy Watson has just met the gorgeous Dane Phillips who's annoying, mysterious, and...naked. Unfortunately, just after she finds him, he commandeers her trusty blue Chevy and holds it hostage for a kiss.

As if meeting this strange boy isn't enough, he helps her to finally meet the recluse father she’s never known, who, along with Dane, turns out to be part of an ancient society of regenerating humans. Ivy learns she is a hybrid, a genetic anomaly that shouldn’t exist - humans and Phoenix are incompatible.

Nathaniel Williams, an extremist member of the Phoenix kidnaps Ivy for an experiment hoping to eradicate the human race. Nathaniel soon discovers that Ivy is immune to the effects of his experiment and that she could actually be the destruction of his people. She must learn to embrace the part of her that is Phoenix in order to save herself from a life of enslavement to the one man that has the power to break down all her defenses.

THE PHOENIX: A GATHERING is a Young Adult Paranormal novel complete at 81,000 words.  This is my first novel.

Thank you for your consideration,

Friday, September 21, 2012

Contests: WriterTherapy

 
The talented team at Writer Therapy are holding yet, another great contest.  But first, they have some great new webisodes that have just been released.  Here is the first one:



And the second one:


I hope you enjoyed these two webisodes as much as I did. Keep checking back at WriterTherapy.com for upcoming videos.

Tuesday, September 11, 2012

Contests: WriterTherapy

So have you ever wanted to enter a writing contest?  I never knew I could ;)  Today, I found out about this contest by WriterTherapy.com and decided to toss my hat into the mix.  Here's a little info about the contest:

We know how important that first line is for hooking an agent, editor, and reader. Now show us some great beginnings! We have three fabulous agents giving prizes for three talented winners of our first page contest. So what are the prizes?

Grand Prize for 3 talented winners
Query critique from agent Sara Crowe, Harvey Klinger
Query critique from agent Molly Ker Hawn, The Bent Agency
1st Chapter critique from Nicole Resciniti, The Seymour Agency

Runners-up will receive awesome prizes, including more 1st chapter critiques, books, mouse pads, and more!

 
So, wouldn't it  be great to win any number of those prizes???  If you're a writer, you should go check it out - who knows, maybe you'll be one of the lucky winners!